Hi Dylan great to see the effort you have put into presentation. In your next reading log you need to put more detail into the plot summary. For instance what are Astrosaurs and how did the Astrosaurs disturb the pirates?. In your personal response I really don't understand your connections you are making to the text, again you need to add in detail and evidence from the text to back up your opinion. For instance (text to self) in the book the Pirates are chasing the Astrosaurs around the stars I can relate to this because there was this time...
Hi Dylan great to see the effort you have put into presentation. In your next reading log you need to put more detail into the plot summary. For instance what are Astrosaurs and how did the Astrosaurs disturb the pirates?. In your personal response I really don't understand your connections you are making to the text, again you need to add in detail and evidence from the text to back up your opinion. For instance (text to self) in the book the Pirates are chasing the Astrosaurs around the stars I can relate to this because there was this time...